Monday, February 26, 2018

Old Sneakers

Been there
Once upon a time
These old sneakers
Stepping for many miles
Dirt from a thousand places
Embedded in the soles
 I wonder aloud
How miles that are left
In those well worn
Pair of shoes
Which speeds up my pace
To finish what I can


10 comments:

  1. Cool to think of the miles walked in an old pair of shoes. Lord, my oldest pair is ten years old. I have lived a decade of my life in them. Yoiks!

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  2. I really love the thought of what those old sneakers can be... each part of dirt a story in itself.

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  3. I also love the idea of where my shoes have been...what soil they have tread upon and how much longer they will carry me.

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  4. A lovely nuanced metaphor wonderfully rendered.

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  5. I love the metaphor and the gratitude.

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  6. Hmmm, but what about buying some new ones and going a bit further?

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  7. These shoes hold a small part of us.. being co travelors on path of happiness and woe 💜

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  8. Oh, this is lovely! Yes, your shoes are your story.Dirt that we do erase...still leave a shadow of the mark!

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